Sunday, 19 August 2018

Grandma and I



Learning GoalI am learning to write a narrative text.
Success criteria: I can do this when I have
  •  a Title
  • Beginning: Who is the story about?
  • Middle: describe the problem and the solution
  • End: What happened at the end?
My grandma drank her cup of tea while I played with my cat.
Grandma spilled her cup of tea on her hand.  She placed her hand under the running water. I got the clean towel and gave it to grandma. Grandma felt better. 
Grandma knew what to do.
                                                        By Matalena

Thursday, 22 March 2018

Trampoline Park

Learning goalWe are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing  words.

My family and I went to the Trampoline Park. I saw my uncle and my dad did a back flip. I was brave to do a back flip too. I jumped and bounced. I jumped and did a front flip. I jumped and jumped higher than my cousin.
We all had a good time. 
                                                     By Matalena

My Trip To The Beach


Learning goalWe are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing  words.

In the weekend my family and I went to the beach. My mum and my dad and I played catch in the sand and I felt the sand gritty between my toes. I splashed and swam in the warm water. The waves swished me away from my dad.
We had fun at the beach
                                                            By Matalena 

Saturday, 10 February 2018

Describe Popcorn

Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when We can describe popcorn using our five senses.

I like popcorn. I like popcorn because it is buttery and salty. It smells delicious and buttery. It crunches in my mouth like dried leaves.
                                                              Matalena

Thursday, 2 November 2017

My Weekend

Learning intention: I am learning to about a recount.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can

  • write an orientation
  • write what I did in order
  • write how I feel
In the weekend it rained very hard I don't like it when it rains because I will catch a cold if I get wet.
So I kept warm.
                                             by Matalena

Wednesday, 27 September 2017

Father's Day

Learning intention: I am learning to write a recount .
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can

  • write an orientation
  • write what I did in order
  • write how I feel 

On father's day my family and I went to Mac Donald to give my dad a surprise party.It was his birthday too. 
We ate crispy fries and burgers. I liked the burgers because it had my favourite lettuce, tomatoes, cucumber pickles and chicken. My dad said thank you for the party.
Then we went home and slept. We had a great party and everyone enjoyed it.
                                                    By Matalena